Illustration & Visual Narrative / Task 2: Decisive Moment

 


9.23.2021 - 10.21.2021 (Week 5 - Week 8)
Audrey Gracia Djohari / 0348120
Illustration & Visual Narrative
Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media / Taylor’s University
Task 2: Decisive Moment



LECTURES

WEEK 5 : Chiaroscuro & Rhythm/Movement

- Chiaroscuro

Chiaroscuro refers to the use of light and dark to create the illusion of three-dimensional volume on flat surface.

  • "Chiaro" = Bright, "Scuro" = Dark

Figure 1.0: Simple Chiaroscuro

  • It's all about balancing the light and the negative space a design can be balanced.
  • Examples of Chiaroscuro: Comics
What happens if a design doesn't use Chiaroscuro:
  • The design would become monotonous and flat.
  • The design would lack the flow and visual hierarchy.
  • The design would lack impact.

Why Chiaroscuro is used:

  • Increase dramatic tension.
  • Create sensational effects. (create movement and flow)
  • Pull viewers' attention to a subject in an intense way.
  • Create a tasteful composition of negative vs positive spaces.
Figure 1.1: Other Chiaroscuro Usage


Studying Chiaroscuro in Adobe Illustrator:
  • Go to Windows > Adjustments > Play with Brightness, Contrast, Levels, Curves
  • Play with these tools until you find the right lighting that definitely hits the spot of your artwork.

 
Figure 1.2: Chiaroscuro in Adobe Illustrator

- Rhythm & Movement

  • Rhythm/flow is one of the most difficult design principles to be achieved in art.
  • The sense of rhythm/flow and movement is created when the composition flows into a direction of a specific point.
  • Flow and movement helps to narrate the illustration effectively by the use of visual hierarchy.
  • To create visual hierarchy, we need to see certain aspects of design, such as: the story, main subject, composition. 
  • To create a good composition we must look at the value tones, shapes, positive & negative space, chiaroscuro, perspectives/spatial depth.

Utilizing the Shapes & Lines in making a composition:
  • Maximize Overlaps: Once you create the plane, try to use many different shapes and line to have a more interesting layout. It will create a much more dynamic scene.
  • Establish Patterns and Rhythms: Layering different shapes and patterns to create the rhythm. 
Figure 1.3: Using different shapes & lines

Figure 1.4: Maximizing Overlaps

Figure 1.5: Establishing Patterns and Rhythms

Figure 1.6: Example of Movement

"Good artists imitate, Great artists steal"
–Pablo Picasso

What to do before producing a final output:

  1. Sketch using black and white to explore the design.
  2. Try to overlap the multi planes and determine the source of light to create the positive and negative space.
  3. Look at the flow and movement of the visual.


INSTRUCTIONS




PRACTICAL

- Task 2/ Decisive Moment -

 Instruction

Figure 2.0: Instruction

WEEK 5:

Visual Research

  • Movie : Bohemian Rhapsody
  • Movie Details:
Release date: October 27, 2018 (Indonesia)Directors: Bryan Singer, Dexter Fletcher
Box office: $904.4 million
Story by: Anthony McCarten; Peter Morgan
Awards: Academy Award for Best Actor in a Leading Role
  • Decisive Scene : 1985 Live Aid Concert
Why Live Aid 1985 Concert is a decisive moment in Bohemian Rhapsody?

Queen were massive in the UK, however they popularity had waned a bit by 1985 and they had gotten a lot of backlash for playing Sun City in South Africa. This concert was in the midst of the apartheid era and tensions were pretty high.  Also, it was kind of the first time they played live since gossip and speculation about Freddie's health was rampant in the tabloids. They were actually planning on taking some time off, but Bob Geldof talked them into appearing. 

And I think the band believed they still had something to prove in this scene. This concert is nearly at the ending of the movie, and it really wraps up the whole story with the perfect music and shows how great Queen actually is. Rami Malek's performance was super iconic and it was brilliant, It's impossible to not get goosebumps while watching this scene. 

The time of the concert was in the afternoon and the audience was tired because of all the performance they've watched. But when Freddie Mercury took over the mic and sing, his energy flows to all of the audience and it was the best 20 minutes in the history of Live Aid Music Festival. I think the fact that Queen killed the concert proves they were still a force to be reckoned with and it immortalized Freddie Mercury's status as the greatest singer and performer.

Figure 2.1: Bohemian Rhapsody, Aa-yoo! Live Aid Scene, Youtube


Figure 2.2: Bohemian Rhapsody, Radio Gaga Live Aid Scene, Youtube

I used these videos as references for my drawing, also as an inspiration. I wanted to capture the moment Freddie Mercury sings the "Aaa-yoooh" part. Because that's his moment of truth, how he proves that he could control the audience as a true performer. He also poses his iconic hand gesture. He raises his hand which is a very impactful and powerful movement.



Figure 2.3, 2.4 and 2.5: References



Idea Exploration & Process

I initially chose Squid Game as my movie reference, I made 3 sketches of it. But I feel like my design is not impactful enough. So I decided to search for other movie.

Figure 2.6: Squid Game Sketch, 10.07.2021

These are my thumbnail sketches for Bohemian Rhapsody. I like the design and I know the scene very well because it's one of my all-time favorite movie. I wanted to put 'We Are The Champions" as a quote.
Figure 2.7: Bohemian Rhapsody Sketch, 10.07.2021



WEEK 6:

Digitization in Adobe Illustrator

Before I started, I searched for the right color palette using Adobe Color. I wanted to combine contrast colors so the design will appear stronger and I could apply the Chiaroscuro principle. So I chose shades of purple and yellow with a little bit of white and black, similar to the movie poster's color. I used purple for darker parts and yellow for lighter parts. Furthermore, these shades really represent the movie itself so it helps viewers to recognize my movie poster.

Figure 2.8: Color palette from Adobe Color, 10.14.2021


Figure 2.9: Adobe Illustrator Artboards, 10.14.2021


Figure 2.10: Details, 10.14.2021

I created every frame in Adobe Illustrator with multiple artboards. I kept everything simple without too much gradient, I only used gradient for the sky, stage and some dots). I actually like how the body of Freddie Mercury turned out, the colors play their roles very well in forming the clothes and his body shape. I also managed to make the yellow color shapes the body as a light reflection.

Applying Chiaroscuro

Chiaroscuro method helped me a lot in determining the light source and its reflection. I could easily saw where I should emphasize the lighting. I used Adobe Photoshop to adjust the brightness, levels, contrast and curves.

 
Figure 2.11: Applying Chiaroscuro by using Adjustment, Adobe Photoshop, 10.14.2021



Applying Movement & Rhythm

Figure 2.12: Flow & Movement, 10.14.2021

Utilizing Shapes & Lines

Learning about utilizing shapes and lines in a setting of a scene really opened my mind on how I create an environment. I tried applying it on this poster. I actually made 5 layers of setting, but I only marked out 3 in the figure below. 

Layers:
  • The first and the closest one (to the viewer's point of view) is the drums. I made them as minimalist silhouettes.
  • The second layer is the stage, where Freddie Mercury stands. I managed to create a one-point perspective here to give the sense of distance.
  • The third layer is the sound system boxes. They are all black silhouettes and I placed them at the top of the stages.
  • The fourth layer is the stadium and the crowd.
  • The last layer is the sky.


Figure 2.13: Overlaps, 10.14.2021



WEEK 7:

Animation in Adobe Photoshop

For the animation, I wanted to emphasize the sense of moving and I want to show how grand and crowded the concert is. I made Freddie Mercury do his iconic hand pose (just like in the real concert) and I also made the whole frame move towards him (zooming), making the drums slowly disappears. Other than that, I made the audience in the form of moving dots to create a crowded illusion. As the frame zooms Freddie Mercury, the dots become more crowded and higher. The black background is the stadium and the half circle with gradient above it is the afternoon sky.


Figure 2.14 & 2.15: Animation Ideas, 10.21.2021


Figure 2.16: Making Animation in Adobe Photoshop, 10.21.2021

I ended up using 20 layers as frames to make the animation. I added the Queen's logo and the movie title "Bohemian Rhapsody by Brian Singer". Not only that, I also added my favorite song as a quote, "We Are The Champions" which is also the most impactful song in the movie in my opinion.

Figure 2.17: Timeframe, 10.21.2021


IMPORTANT NOTE:
I really wanted to try making animation using Video Timeline, but unfortunately I cannot use that fiture in my Macbook with M1 chip, there's no option for Video Timeline, I can only use Time Frame. I've tried many different things and read many websites to fix this problem but turns out it's because of the M1 Chip. Adobe hasn't make Video Timeline available for my laptop. So I used Time Frame instead and make the GIF frame by frame.

Figure 2.18: My Frame Animation Option (No Video Timeline), 10.21.2021



WEEK 8 & 9:

Animation Experimentation

On my first attempt, I moved the sky upward so the stadium also became bigger, this made the whole animation looks too shaky and the background part's movement is not natural. Also the crowd moved in a weird way like they are flying. I wasn't satisfied at all with this one. 

Figure 2.19: 1st Attempt, 10.21.2021

On my second attempt, I didn't move the sky and stadium at all. This appeared to make more sense. Logically, the stadium and the sky shouldn't appear moving because their distance is too far, so the zooming effect is not far enough to affect their sizes (the change of size would be too slight to be visible). I also added the title of the movie and the quote "We Are the Champions" by adjusting their opacity in each frame, which appeared as fade in effect.

Figure 2.20: 2nd Attempt, 10.21.2021

I still thought the second attempt wasn't enough. So I added the Queen's (band) logo at the front frame. And I made the whole animation fades out at the end. And the figure below is my third attempt.

Figure 2.21: 3rd Attempt, 10.21.2021


Final Outcome

Figure 2.22: "Bohemian Rhapsody", Final Outcome in JPG, 10.21.2021


Figure 2.23: "Bohemian Rhapsody", Final Outcome in PDF, 10.21.2021

Figure 2.24: "Bohemian Rhapsody", Final GIF, 10.21.2021

Figure 2.25: "Bohemian Rhapsody", Final Video with Audio, 10.21.2021

Google Drive Link:
https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1-4m0sNBS6ssfjSiToO8PXDBIkrGHW8Ww



FEEDBACK

WEEK 9:

Miss Jennifer said my animation looks really good. Poster composition is well done. Though she would like to acknowledge what's the decisive moment behind the design. (I've written the reason why this design is decisive in the Visual Research part).




REFLECTION

Experience
I love this task so much because it involves movie scenes. I had a quite hard time finding the ideas, but once I got the inspiration, I knew exactly what I had to do. I enjoyed this task as it allows me to create my own scene and composition.


Observations
This task made me did many research on movie scenes and it was very fun. And I observed how important a decisive moment in a movie is. And I realized that it's a designer's job to be able to emphasize a complex story in a design and still wraps up the whole excitement of that story. 

Findings
I discovered many new tricks in Adobe Illustrator and Photoshop, especially in making animation.




FURTHER READING

Davis, B. (2017) Movie Comics: Page to Screen/Screen to Page. Rutgers University Press, New Brunswick & New Jersey.

Toromanoff, A. (2017) Impossible photography: Surreal pictures that challenge our perception. Eken Press, London.

Tillman, B. (2015) Creative character design. Focal Press, Taylor & Francis, New York & London.


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